One Night #flashfiction

On a night bound for no where

Two lonely hearts collided

“For this night love me” she implored

He felt a careening heat

expelled desire  he’d never known

When he reluctantly shook sleep from his head

He wondered if a storm front had passed thru the night and reorganized his room

Had it been real?

I’m joining in on a writing site that inspires fiction in 55 words. It is hosted by G-Man aka Mr. Know it All.

http://photo.accuweather.com/photogallery/details/photo/82572/Central+PA+Storms+630++Mushroom+Cloud

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16 thoughts on “One Night #flashfiction

  1. G-Man says:

    Dani…?
    Welcome to the Friday Funfest!!!
    This ain’t your first Rodeo Missy….
    This little Gem was very touching, teared up a bit too.
    Loved your 55
    Thanks for playing, and have a Kick Ass Week-End

  2. Oh, what a night he had then LOL if it was a dream or not. 😉
    Great 55!
    Yes, my little dog Timmy is quite a character. Love him to bits.

  3. hedgewitch says:

    A storm of words, and a very vivid dream in 55.

  4. brian says:

    ha….to destroy the room that must have been some night…i hope it was real for his sake…smiles.

  5. 5thsister says:

    I was immediately reminded of Bog Segar’s “Night Moves”:

    …Workin’ on our night moves
    Trying to lose the awkward teenage blues
    Workin’ on our night moves
    In the summertime
    And oh the wonder
    Felt the lightning
    And we waited on the thunder
    Waited on the thunder …

    I enjoyed this write very much!

  6. Katherine says:

    Hope he can remember enough of it to make it worthwhile (whether it was real or not!) HOT, hot, hot!

  7. Talon says:

    Those are the best sorts of dreams 🙂 Loved your 55.

  8. ladynimue says:

    Ahem Ahem ! Such powerful dreams 😉

  9. Mama Zen says:

    Sizzling! Love this 55!

  10. Steve Isaak says:

    Good, fun write – great use of waste-no-words linework.

  11. Raven says:

    Love those kinds of dreams…

  12. Heaven says:

    I hope it was for real…Nice one ~

  13. Teresa says:

    What an amazing night that must have been!

  14. Margaret says:

    ha! If you know teenage boys, there rooms always look that way. 🙂

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